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第二节读后续写（满分25分)1.本题总分为25分，按以下5个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。第一档：（1一5分)与段落开头衔接较差，产出内容太少，全文内容不连贯；第二档：(6一10分)与所给短文有一定的关系，与段落开头有一定程度的衔接，写出了一些有关内容，`较少使用语句间连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性；第三档：(11一15分)与所给短文关系较为密切，与段落开头有一定程度的衔接，写出了若干有关内容，应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯；第四档：(16一20分)与所给短文融洽度较高，与段落开头衔接较为合理，内容比较丰富，比较有效地使用了语句间连接成分，所续写短文结构紧凑：第五档：(21一25分)与所给短文融洽度高，与段落开头衔接合理，内容丰富，有效地使用了语句间连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。3.词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分。4.评分时，应注意的主要内容为：与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况；应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；上下文的连贯性。5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6.如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。It took about a whole minute for her to stammer her name and class.By that time,murmurswere heard in the audience."Why is she taking so long?"people around me asked.I shiftednervously in my seat,wishing I were somewhere else.Finally,my sister started to sing.I bracedmyself for the worst.She opened her mouth,and I was transfixed-she sang effortlessly andmelodiously.Her voice rang unselfconsciously through the hall,beautiful in its power.I exhaledand watched in wonder.Paragraph 2 (version 1):How did I not know that my sister could sing so sweetly?How could I have doubted mysister's abilities?I listened ever so carefully to the lyrics she had composed all by herself and myheart gave way.I had been so wrong.Guilt and shame filled my heart as I listened to my sibling.Although she knew that I was embarrassed by her and was reluctant to attend her concert,she hadforgiven me;she had never taken anything that I had done to her to heart.It was then that I resolvedto love her unconditionally.It was as if a veil had been lifted from my eyes,and my heart was full.Paragraph 2 (version 2):How did I not know that my sister could sing so sweetly?Watching her on stage that day,Irealized my mistake in judging her solely based on her social awkwardness.Her talent anddetermination surpassed any momentary embarrassment I'd felt.After her performance,Iapproached her backstage,and we shared a warm hug.Tears welled up in my eyes as I expressedmy pride.From that day,I no longer cared about others'opinions of my sister's differences.I'dlearned a valuable lesson about acceptance and the importance of celebrating uniqueness.Mysister didn't just perform;she offered me a new perspective on life-more compassionate andunderstanding.高二英语四校联考答案第2页共4页
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